Comments on: Bernie (Part Three) http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/11/bernie-part-three/ Writings from the past and the present Mon, 01 Dec 2008 20:39:59 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Mark http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/11/bernie-part-three/#comment-303 Mark Fri, 15 Feb 2008 04:41:10 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/11/bernie-part-three/#comment-303 Simon - I hope not too quickly. You'll get some past issues. Don't worry. There are scenes being set, for sure. I'm not sure of all of them, yet, but others I have a pretty good idea. Moksha - Thanks. She's walking around the town where I grew up. Simon - I hope not too quickly. You’ll get some past issues. Don’t worry.

There are scenes being set, for sure. I’m not sure of all of them, yet, but others I have a pretty good idea.

Moksha - Thanks. She’s walking around the town where I grew up.

]]> By: Moksha Gren http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/11/bernie-part-three/#comment-298 Moksha Gren Tue, 12 Feb 2008 19:55:10 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/11/bernie-part-three/#comment-298 I'm very curious where this is heading. There's clearly more to her situation than hearing loss since even folks with no hearing at all get along just fine. I like the idea that she's treating ailment with the Arkansas springs. The local accuracy really helps the story. The write on this one is excellent, Mark. Preparing the work in advance seems to agree with you, eh? I’m very curious where this is heading. There’s clearly more to her situation than hearing loss since even folks with no hearing at all get along just fine.

I like the idea that she’s treating ailment with the Arkansas springs. The local accuracy really helps the story. The write on this one is excellent, Mark. Preparing the work in advance seems to agree with you, eh?

]]> By: Simon http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/11/bernie-part-three/#comment-296 Simon Tue, 12 Feb 2008 14:58:46 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/11/bernie-part-three/#comment-296 The picture of Bernie's current lifestyle is developing rather quickly. I have to wonder what sort of past issues will crop up upon her evening meeting with Shonda. And if Jeff's history will play any sort of significant part, now that Bernie can also be called a vagrant. The scene is setting itself up... The picture of Bernie’s current lifestyle is developing rather quickly. I have to wonder what sort of past issues will crop up upon her evening meeting with Shonda. And if Jeff’s history will play any sort of significant part, now that Bernie can also be called a vagrant.

The scene is setting itself up…

]]> By: Dave http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/11/bernie-part-three/#comment-295 Dave Tue, 12 Feb 2008 12:29:23 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/11/bernie-part-three/#comment-295 Very good... I wish I could write like this. I actually saw the diner in my mind, and the roadway with cars whizzing by. Very good…
I wish I could write like this. I actually saw the diner in my mind, and the roadway with cars whizzing by.

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