Comments on: Bernie (Part Six) http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/17/bernie-part-six/ Writings from the past and the present Mon, 01 Dec 2008 19:12:12 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Moksha Gren http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/17/bernie-part-six/#comment-354 Moksha Gren Wed, 05 Mar 2008 21:03:36 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/17/bernie-part-six/#comment-354 Nice to see Anna making an appearance in your story ;) And yeah, Simon's bear hump (a funny phrase if ever there was one) is a bit more striking than Northwest Arkansas....but no more beautiful I think. Secrets just don't bode well here...given the related reading. Nice to see Anna making an appearance in your story ;)

And yeah, Simon’s bear hump (a funny phrase if ever there was one) is a bit more striking than Northwest Arkansas….but no more beautiful I think.

Secrets just don’t bode well here…given the related reading.

]]> By: One Wink http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/17/bernie-part-six/#comment-330 One Wink Fri, 22 Feb 2008 00:58:48 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/17/bernie-part-six/#comment-330 I'm getting a little behind due to LIFE (ack!) but as you can see, I keep comin' back to see how Bernie's doin'. I'm amazed that all of this has been in your head, Mark. You're missing your calling, man. I’m getting a little behind due to LIFE (ack!) but as you can see, I keep comin’ back to see how Bernie’s doin’.
I’m amazed that all of this has been in your head, Mark. You’re missing your calling, man.

]]> By: Mark http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/17/bernie-part-six/#comment-326 Mark Wed, 20 Feb 2008 00:12:51 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/17/bernie-part-six/#comment-326 Whoa. The area around Bear's Hump is much more scenic than around the Sugarloaf Mountain depicted here. I had to look it up on Google Images, of course. I'd love to go there. Whoa. The area around Bear’s Hump is much more scenic than around the Sugarloaf Mountain depicted here. I had to look it up on Google Images, of course. I’d love to go there.

]]> By: Simon http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/17/bernie-part-six/#comment-325 Simon Tue, 19 Feb 2008 14:58:01 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/02/17/bernie-part-six/#comment-325 The action up on top of Sugarloaf reminded me of the Bear's Hump in Waterton Park here in Alberta. Same sort of thing with the rock outcropping jutting above a tree-lined mountain slope. Minus the attempted rape and subsequent plummet, that is. I liked the interaction in this one between Pops, Bernie and Nathan. I think the dialogue was pretty natural and smooth. I'm of course curious about what Shonda means by having a little secret. That part wasn't terribly clear. Do she and Jeff have a secret? Do she and Bernie have a secret? And how would Jeff have ruined it? Tune in next time... The action up on top of Sugarloaf reminded me of the Bear’s Hump in Waterton Park here in Alberta. Same sort of thing with the rock outcropping jutting above a tree-lined mountain slope. Minus the attempted rape and subsequent plummet, that is.

I liked the interaction in this one between Pops, Bernie and Nathan. I think the dialogue was pretty natural and smooth.

I’m of course curious about what Shonda means by having a little secret. That part wasn’t terribly clear. Do she and Jeff have a secret? Do she and Bernie have a secret? And how would Jeff have ruined it? Tune in next time…

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