Comments on: Bernie (Part Nine)

By: One Wink

One Wink — Tue, 04 Mar 2008 22:35:50 +0000

I had commented here, but it seems to be gone. I wrote something about how I appreciate the way Pop uses his crossword puzzles as a sort of crystal ball. I forget what else…

By: Mark

Mark — Sat, 01 Mar 2008 01:30:30 +0000

Dave - Yeah, I hadn’t quite planned on leaving it hanging over the weekend. But, oh well. Tune in next time.

Simon - Again, we shall see. And, thanks for the editing. I fixed it.

Cherie - Thanks for coming over! Glad you’re enjoying.

Tanya - This is the first story I’ve based in our hometown. It has been fun, and Google maps have helped a lot!

By: Tanya

Tanya — Fri, 29 Feb 2008 18:30:50 +0000

Okay Mark….You’ve hooked me on the story. I can’t wait to read the rest. I love reading a story set to the backdrop of Heber. Your descriptions take me back to my own memories at Spring Park, Sugarloaf, Thrill Hill, etc.

By: Cherie

Cherie — Fri, 29 Feb 2008 16:28:12 +0000

Saw the bulliten on myspace, clicked on over and have read installments 1-9. I’m ready to read the rest of the story. Definately reminds me of time spent in Heber. Brings many memories. Once again, an enjoyable read. Thanks!

By: Simon

Simon — Fri, 29 Feb 2008 15:05:45 +0000

I’m still not convinced that Shonda has purely good intentions. She seems to be trying too hard.

I think you have an extra “Bernie” in here:
“…every corner held memories for her Bernie, but the former site of Whitaker’s Drug…”

Plus, there’s still Jeff to think about. Not sure how he’s going to fit into all of this. Now we just have to wait and see.

By: Dave

Dave — Fri, 29 Feb 2008 12:11:54 +0000

Sheesh… always leave ‘em wanting more I guess…. *LOL*
I was hoping to get SOME kind of clue what awaits….