Comments on: Bernie (Part Eleven) http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/ Writings from the past and the present Mon, 01 Dec 2008 18:14:42 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Dave http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/#comment-361 Dave Mon, 10 Mar 2008 11:04:22 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/#comment-361 Yes... yes, you are a machine Mark... *LOL* Yes… yes, you are a machine Mark… *LOL*

]]> By: One Wink http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/#comment-360 One Wink Sat, 08 Mar 2008 17:01:38 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/#comment-360 Anxious to see what comes next... Anxious to see what comes next…

]]> By: Mark http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/#comment-359 Mark Fri, 07 Mar 2008 06:01:14 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/#comment-359 Dave - Oh, come on! I'm not a machine! Simon - I worried for quite some time over how long to have Bernie knocked out. I decided that in order for another event to play out and still keep my timeline intact with the related stories, I needed to have her out for about a month. StacieRN - Thanks so much for everything -- especially coming over here to read! Everyone - I posted this chapter and questions about it to allnurses.com, a nurse's online community. It's an amazing resource for them, and several proved instrumental in shaping this chapter to be fairly accurate as far as how things would go in Bernie's various states of being comatose/awake. Dave - Oh, come on! I’m not a machine!

Simon - I worried for quite some time over how long to have Bernie knocked out. I decided that in order for another event to play out and still keep my timeline intact with the related stories, I needed to have her out for about a month.

StacieRN - Thanks so much for everything — especially coming over here to read!

Everyone - I posted this chapter and questions about it to allnurses.com, a nurse’s online community. It’s an amazing resource for them, and several proved instrumental in shaping this chapter to be fairly accurate as far as how things would go in Bernie’s various states of being comatose/awake.

]]> By: StacieRN http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/#comment-358 StacieRN Thu, 06 Mar 2008 15:43:08 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/#comment-358 Sounds great. Love the changes. Very vivid. Sounds great. Love the changes. Very vivid.

]]> By: Simon http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/#comment-357 Simon Thu, 06 Mar 2008 15:15:04 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/#comment-357 A month?! My goodness. At least with the injuries she sustained Jeff's quick attempt to frame Bernie for stabbing Glenda won't hold any water. I'm really hoping that she can get on with becoming business partners with Shonda. I'm totally rooting for Bernie at this point. (Not that I wasn't before, mind you.) A month?! My goodness. At least with the injuries she sustained Jeff’s quick attempt to frame Bernie for stabbing Glenda won’t hold any water. I’m really hoping that she can get on with becoming business partners with Shonda. I’m totally rooting for Bernie at this point. (Not that I wasn’t before, mind you.)

]]> By: Dave http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/#comment-356 Dave Thu, 06 Mar 2008 12:41:55 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/03/05/bernie-part-eleven/#comment-356 booooooo... not enough information! *LOL* You're such a tease Mark...! booooooo… not enough information! *LOL*

You’re such a tease Mark…!

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