Comments on: The Keys Are In It (Part Eight) http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/07/23/the-keys-are-in-it-part-eight/ Writings from the past and the present Mon, 17 May 2010 11:47:06 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Mark http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/07/23/the-keys-are-in-it-part-eight/comment-page-1/#comment-398 Mark Fri, 25 Jul 2008 12:49:08 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/?p=111#comment-398 Dave - The gun did fire. I changed the wording a bit, because with these posts coming so far apart I know it's hard to remember details. When the man shot at Blake in Blake's back yard, there were no sounds of gunshots, either. Because I'm not sure what a silenced gun really sounds like, I was trying to avoid describing it. It should be more clear now if you re-read it (and should also make you wonder more about Doug than you did when you thought he had not been shot). Dave – The gun did fire. I changed the wording a bit, because with these posts coming so far apart I know it’s hard to remember details. When the man shot at Blake in Blake’s back yard, there were no sounds of gunshots, either. Because I’m not sure what a silenced gun really sounds like, I was trying to avoid describing it. It should be more clear now if you re-read it (and should also make you wonder more about Doug than you did when you thought he had not been shot).

]]> By: Dave http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/07/23/the-keys-are-in-it-part-eight/comment-page-1/#comment-397 Dave Fri, 25 Jul 2008 11:18:55 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/?p=111#comment-397 I'm wondering, if the gun didn't fire... why worry? Other than that... a lot of chaos going on! I’m wondering, if the gun didn’t fire… why worry?

Other than that… a lot of chaos going on!

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