Comments on: Falcon http://storyblog.markwill.com Writings from the past and the present Mon, 17 May 2010 11:47:06 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Mark http://storyblog.markwill.com/all-stories/falcon/comment-page-1/#comment-164 Mark Sun, 05 Nov 2006 03:30:08 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/falcon/#comment-164 Dan - Thanks for reading, and for commenting. Feel free to share with anybody you think might enjoy it. I still need to polish out some typo's and there are even a few major changes I'd like to make. The latter is mostly a symptom of posting it as I wrote it -- you're reading a first draft! (but I still think you'll like what's to come.) I haven't shopped it around, but I'm open to suggestions. Thanks again. Dan – Thanks for reading, and for commenting. Feel free to share with anybody you think might enjoy it. I still need to polish out some typo’s and there are even a few major changes I’d like to make. The latter is mostly a symptom of posting it as I wrote it — you’re reading a first draft! (but I still think you’ll like what’s to come.)

I haven’t shopped it around, but I’m open to suggestions.

Thanks again.

]]> By: Reckless http://storyblog.markwill.com/all-stories/falcon/comment-page-1/#comment-163 Reckless Sat, 04 Nov 2006 22:50:49 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/falcon/#comment-163 Hey Mark-- I've read up to ch.8 so far and this a damn fine story. Good concept, plot, characters -- fine work. [In case you're wondering, found you from Whedonesque, linked to your Dallas audio files of Adam Baldwin et al.] Thanks for posting the story. You shopped it around at all? =Dan= Hey Mark–
I’ve read up to ch.8 so far and this a damn fine story. Good concept, plot, characters — fine work.

[In case you're wondering, found you from Whedonesque, linked to your Dallas audio files of Adam Baldwin et al.]

Thanks for posting the story. You shopped it around at all?

=Dan=

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