Comments for A Storied Man http://storyblog.markwill.com Writings from the past and the present Tue, 02 Dec 2008 13:04:26 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 Comment on The Keys Are In It (Conclusion) by Moksha Gren http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/11/19/the-keys-are-in-it-conclusion/#comment-409 Moksha Gren Wed, 19 Nov 2008 23:33:44 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/?p=120#comment-409 Good thing the guard didn't like V8, eh? I had fun reading this, Mark. I'd write a lengthy review, but I already did that in email form. I basically just wanted to write on the wall while I was here. ThE gREn wAS HerE Good thing the guard didn’t like V8, eh?

I had fun reading this, Mark. I’d write a lengthy review, but I already did that in email form. I basically just wanted to write on the wall while I was here.

ThE gREn wAS HerE

]]> Comment on The Keys Are In It (Part Fifteen) by Mark http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/11/07/the-keys-are-in-it-part-fifteen/#comment-408 Mark Fri, 14 Nov 2008 07:03:00 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/?p=119#comment-408 Dave - I can't figure out why that first one is a typo. You have two sets of quotes on each end, but I don't see it that way in the text. Hmm... The second one, I fixed. Thanks. Dave - I can’t figure out why that first one is a typo. You have two sets of quotes on each end, but I don’t see it that way in the text. Hmm…

The second one, I fixed. Thanks.

]]> Comment on The Keys Are In It (Part Fifteen) by Dave http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/11/07/the-keys-are-in-it-part-fifteen/#comment-407 Dave Fri, 07 Nov 2008 12:20:40 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/?p=119#comment-407 Two small typos: "“But we stole dude’s truck.”" and "He pulled his gun on us after helped him out of your minivan." Hmm... I'm wondering where the last section of this post is taking us. Two small typos:
““But we stole dude’s truck.””
and
“He pulled his gun on us after helped him out of your minivan.”

Hmm… I’m wondering where the last section of this post is taking us.

]]> Comment on The Keys Are In It (Part Fourteen) by Dave http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/10/27/the-keys-are-in-it-part-fourteen/#comment-406 Dave Wed, 29 Oct 2008 16:22:29 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/?p=118#comment-406 I just love this sentence: "Directly ahead, clouds stood tall and dark above the veil layer, lying in wait for unwelcome guests." Very well done, as always Mark! I just love this sentence:
“Directly ahead, clouds stood tall and dark above the veil layer, lying in wait for unwelcome guests.”

Very well done, as always Mark!

]]> Comment on The Keys Are In It (Part Thirteen) by Mark http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/10/08/the-keys-are-in-it-part-thirteen/#comment-405 Mark Thu, 23 Oct 2008 12:20:36 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/?p=117#comment-405 Dave - Thanks, and thanks for hanging in there with this story. Dave - Thanks, and thanks for hanging in there with this story.

]]> Comment on The Keys Are In It (Part Thirteen) by Dave http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/10/08/the-keys-are-in-it-part-thirteen/#comment-404 Dave Thu, 09 Oct 2008 14:03:52 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/?p=117#comment-404 Wow...... Wow……

]]> Comment on The Keys Are In It (Part Twelve) by Dave http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/09/22/the-keys-are-in-it-part-twelve/#comment-403 Dave Tue, 23 Sep 2008 11:21:16 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/?p=116#comment-403 Well I hope you don't want another couple of months for the next installment! *LOL* Also, you missed a good chance to leave a cliff-hanger by saying something like "He thought pensively as she sat beside him, pushing the hair out of her face, he knew he had to tell her everything, and he begin 'I have to tell you the truth...' (then leave us hanging!) *LOL* Well I hope you don’t want another couple of months for the next installment! *LOL*

Also, you missed a good chance to leave a cliff-hanger by saying something like “He thought pensively as she sat beside him, pushing the hair out of her face, he knew he had to tell her everything, and he begin ‘I have to tell you the truth…’ (then leave us hanging!) *LOL*

]]> Comment on The Keys Are In It (Part Eleven) by Dave http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/08/25/the-keys-are-in-it-part-eleven/#comment-402 Dave Mon, 25 Aug 2008 12:49:55 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/?p=115#comment-402 More More MORE!!! *LOL* More More MORE!!! *LOL*

]]> Comment on The Keys Are In It (Part Ten) by Dave http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/08/06/the-keys-are-in-it-part-ten/#comment-401 Dave Fri, 22 Aug 2008 11:26:44 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/?p=113#comment-401 Hmm, I didn't even know this was up (this episode)... now I'm wondering where it's going. Hmm, I didn’t even know this was up (this episode)… now I’m wondering where it’s going.

]]> Comment on The Keys Are In It (Part Nine) by Dave http://storyblog.markwill.com/2008/07/30/the-keys-are-in-it-part-nine/#comment-399 Dave Thu, 31 Jul 2008 12:17:45 +0000 http://storyblog.markwill.com/?p=112#comment-399 Wow..... I still don't know who he is...! Wow….. I still don’t know who he is…!

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